I was inspired by a teller in the bank, and then I decided to become a superb bank clerk like them. They had a major influence on my future dream and definitely affected my life in a positive way. Because I was interested in bank clerk, I was sure to be a bank clerk who can resolve requirement of client and give a better life to them. 문장 오류가 있는지 검토 부탁드립니다.
[질문] I was inspired by a teller in the bank, and then I decided to become a superb bank clerk like them. They had a major influence on my future dream and definitely affected my life in a positive way. Because I was interested in bank clerk, I was sure to be a bank clerk who can resolve requirement of client and give a better life to them. 문장 오류가 있는지 검토 부탁드립니다.